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The God of Food 👑😁 🥪
They have bo respect for a God 😂
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What else? He had had his revenge
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wow that escalate quick 😳
pengawal gk guna, ini bntr lagi bapaknya dtg balas dendam, trus dikalahkan, trus kakeknya yg dtg, trus dikalahkan lagi, lalu kakek buyutnya dtg ya
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Honestly, I have no complaints for this book. It has a captivating cover, intriguing synopsis, and a writing style that flows so naturally that I have a great time reading the book. The Author is really good with her words. She describes things well, not much but not too little, just enough for the readers to have a picture the situation the main character's in. Yes, there's some errors in the writing but it's quite subtle as I read through the chapters so fast :) Can't help it as your words flow so well that I don't have to stop and reread each sentences just to grasp its meaning, lol. So far, good job Author! Overall, it's quite a good read. The transmigration started a bit late but it's fine for me. The pacing is nice, a fast one but didn't seem rushed.
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Giving this book the 5 stars it deserves as I honestly have no complaints for this book. The Writing Quality is good, I mean, very very good. I really like how the Author writes. Descriptions for the world's and the characters (including the ghosts) were vivid and easy to picture and understand. As for the characters' emotions, author had portrayed it well. I had read past the first action scene (where the mc almost die) and I was awe-struck by the execution of Author's amazing story-telling. The Author has perfect grasp of the mc's disheveled emotion and the situation he's in. The scenes were written so well that it felt like it have a momentum of its own. Like, there's a time when I got excited at how fast things was escalating, I was suddenly brought to a stop, forced to ponder over the previous paragraphs, feeling the transitions of the mc's emotions. For the story development, it's fast and captivating. Well, personally, I really like fast-paced novel so this novel truly suits my taste. With just a chapter, the book had successfully piqued my interest. How so? An action scene had taken place at the very first chapter. Not some ramblings to describe the world like some always did, but action! The enemy, the forces that was against them, and what's the conflict between them was introduced all (with vivid descriptions as well!) just by the first chapter. (If this is what you call as a hook then Author, you got me!) For the character design, it's nice I guess? Well, I could vaguely perceive the mc's personality from the way he converse (The Author is really good at conversations! It wasn't stiff and flowed out so naturally that their words carry some kind of an emotion/ tone?). And also, the way he thinks and reacts when he was in danger. It was done so well that it had successfully brought his character alive. For the world background, uhmm, how to say? I think the Author had done a lot of preparations for this. Like, there was an auxiliary chapter dedicated for this. Yes, it's separated from the story but I don't mind so, Good Job Author! And lastly for the Update Stability, it's recently updated so I don't think there's any problem with this. Overall, I really enjoy reading this book. The writing was smooth and flows so well that it was really pleasing for the eye. Honestly, this book might be too advanced for me, I think, as there are times when I need to search for the 'alien' words to understand the meanings of each sentences but of course, it's my problem, don't worry about it. So.. Thank you for writing such an amazing book!