Grenat

I know almost all of you are reading this story for fun but revealing himself/herself to a world that see cultivation for the first time is very foolish and naive thinking.

Chapters are short and the writing that has been chosen made it look more silly than anything else. :(

You know MyLittleBrother quite well :D

the update stats he was asking are the numbers ... Like a gaming status as we had in the past chapters.

It's a dream sadly :'(

So much caps in one chapter O_O. It was hurtful for my eyes, the chapter was nice overall. I like the start of the story. Especially the fact that the MC accept his nature as devil.

The writing quality is lower than what I can handle. The way the MC and other character speak is bland or void of emotion due to the writing. I dare not say the story is bad so I don't post a review but just type a comment here. Maybe your story will go up in the ranking in the future and I'll check it out again. Hope that you rewrite every chapters of course.

I will stop here, not enough chapter for now. Your story is fun to read, some things can be changed in your wording but overall it was a pleasure to read it until chapter 53. I'm saving your story until you reach a good number of chapter. Keep it up Sixth, you're doing good.

It's a healthy dao :D

" Killing humans was naturally evil " ...