MOREEEEEEE. Author, seriously, you did a very good job. Will be adding this on my library. I have nothing to say. This novel is perfect. The grammar, the world building, the character. Sheeeeet! This is my kind of book.

This Novel is promising. 16 chaps on the first day. The wordings are good but the commas and periods are sometimes out of place. Nevertheless, the story is immersive. Author, I would like to read more. I'll be adding it in my library and will wait for more updates.

hey, where's mine? I am Jahy in the Forums actually

Aether... Interesting. Is it the same as mana? Well, anyway this is a new feel compared to the trending books. I would love to read more. Author please 🙏. That aside, i would like to know how their place raged by fire. Looking forward to the heights of this book. Best of luck, author.

This is itttttt. O love this book. Waahhhhh, everyone that's maltreated deserve a new life where they can be supreme. I'll give this book five stars!

🤩 Author, I love this book. Looking forward to when the Demon emperor appears and bring terror to the world. Hmmm, I love it that whenever the demon appears, everyone would tremble in fear upon hearing his name.

Is that me? We have the same name.

sorry, i have my proposal proposal defense this week at the university. however, by next week, chaps will be on regular update. thank you.

Thank you, for this. This made me laugh at my work. However, rest assured that I will make it better.

spoiler alert! somewhere at the end

thank you for the comment

Author, I am jahy from the forum. please review my book. I've don yours.

Author, I am jahy from the forum. please review my book. I've done yours.

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No need for words. Five stars for this book. This is what I need yo escape this painful reality. Ahh, moreeee. Love the author's hunker, actually.

I love the introduction. The way it talked about the brain and the nervous system. Way to go, author. This book would definitely reach the top. Fives Stars for this book. Keep it up.

This book is immersive. The writing quality of this book is superior. The character design, world background, they are perfect. Way to go, author!

Puts a smile on my face. This is my kind of novel. However, Author, please, consider removing the indentions. anyway, I am looking forward to when this book become popular.

This book, I'm keeping it. Everything is good, except for the commas and the capitalization. Author, please make time to edit your chaps. With that said, I am looking forward to when this book becomes extremely popular.

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