Alanray64
Avid reader, particular interests in Urban, rebirth/cultivation, critical returns and such novels along the theme of “am I a cultivation big shot”
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Clenching..
There needs to be a balance in a MCs mindset. So far, all I am seeing is just pure evil and nothing else. At this stage, he should have given the girl a soft smile etc to further lure her in. Guess the author is living his dream.
Trial…
Trial….not trail.
??whats this?
No harm? Yet holding a knife behind her back? Id really like to see what it was when she means harm….
Wodden? Yeh I know… wooden.
Bread😆😆😂😂 Pretty sure he meant beard.
The treasure is a one time use? Limited, disappointing.
Seriously? Narcissistic MC? I really get tired of this trope being used. It is like his only skill and is proud of it. 👎
Ugh even entertaining the thought of a submissive MCis a huge No. I’m not sure now if it is worth investing in this.
Most likely a strength is everything and women aren’t needed to interfere. Going to be a very unbalanced book, emotionless. 👎
Does saying assassinated sound wrong here ? The guy survived so maybe wording the paragraph in such a way like “survived an assassination attempt and is still at risk”?
Trials.