DolanTramp

So you want me to read 600 chapters of a story which will take weeks..? Especially if you cannot even read my sentence properly. "His other works". And you didnt even deny the other statements

Great story..? Its already translated and the author is basicly a rapist/lolicon/racist in his other works so how great can this one be

//m-soshuwu-com.translate.goog/RenZaiDouLuoShanBaoDaTui/977398.html?_x_tr_sl=auto&_x_tr_tl=en&_x_tr_hl=de add https: at the start

As if this translation is good. The author just copied and pasted it from the mtl versions. 1 out of 3 he/ she mistakes arent corrected. Every 2nd/ 3rd paragraph has mistakes that come out due to mtl translations. Doesnt even bother mentioning that its a fanfic that is mtl translated which he only corrected

Sooo.. he basicly made hundreds, maybe even thousands, childrens life a hell just to repay them for bringing him up, while beating him as well? And he also destroyed a whole pirate group because hes "catious" aka a psycho in the same chapter? Man the mc is such a scum

Man best review ever. Why is it trash? Because its utter garbage. Why is it bad? BEcause is disgusting trash and cliche (which novel isnt cliche..?).

Its a chinese urban novel so there will be ancient martial artist that can tank sniper bullets and maybe even cultivation bullshit.. Lets not forget the doctors that can strenghten their bodies with medicine and are immune to poison/ heat/ cold

Yandere Hinata*

Ehh i only read up to the naruto part and it was not really well done. - Full of mistakes (every 3rd sentence had at least one typo), the worst one was a sentence with 4 typos that the author copy pasted into the next chapter as well. - follows the story with the excuse "Dont wanna grab attention to Naruto" (the only changes are a female naruto/ kurama and yandere naruto loving him and we all know why.. horny author. Btw he kept making sexual nuances at a 6 year old naruto and i quote "hourglass figure") --> it was basicly "weak naruto", Graduation, Mizuki stealing arc, team with only 2 people without any explaination.., bridge arc (as support) and most of it is like the anime - makes everyones iq around the mc lower and made zabuza a 15 year old with anger problems - reads too many chinese novels. (made Naruto be like the anime naruto until the graduation so that he/ she can suprise everyone and thinks its funny) (also thinks that doing a dance in the fight against zabuza is entertaining/ funny..) - system thats too op (basicly omnipotent without many explainations)

Maybe but adding one and adding hundreds are different. They need to buy rights if they want to publish it on their website (if they are even allowed not sure). Different name, slightly different story? They can claim its a different novel so no rights needed