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Discarded23hComentado porCh 231 -228- No more secrets- Discarded23hComentado por
SAVAGE! yeah just push inferiority complex girl even further with savage words. next time use 'silly girl' instead
"What a little idiot…" - Discarded5dComentado por
too many things broke the immersion of reading this
•Jade Create The Heaven made by Jade Emperor - Discarded6dComentado por
this woman is such a tease
"Both my husband and son seem to enjoy your presence. So don't you think no one will complain if I spent some time enjoying you, Hachi?" - Discarded8dComentado por
thats rather dunb reason placnig to d. but fanfic is always flawed so ig its fine
[In all aspects, he appears to be an extraordinary student. Including some other students, he is one of the few in the school with incredible abilities, comparable to our graduates. However, we've seen a major problem with this student, that prevented his placement in Class A. Although he might not show it, he never made the effort of forming any meaningful relationship until now. He seems to keep others in a certain distance away from him, to prevent himself on experiencing the same pain he did on a prior incident during his childhood. We've deemed it as necessary, to advocate his placement into Class D instead. We hope, this student can process about the traumatic experience from his past, and be able to move on, forming meaningful bonds with others.] - Discarded8dComentado por
this guy keep changing gender
Yufeng clenched her teeth tightly! - Discarded8dComentado por
this dude makes reason too much. not everything is in need of reason explanation. its too long winded dude
When I see that she might become useful, I might analyze her. As the things now are, I would rather not. - Discarded11dComentado por
kaijuu battle lesgoo
"What... what is that? Are those monsters?" she wondered, trying to make sense of the scene before her. "But where's the Ultraman?" - Discarded11dComentado por
its funny that the author explaining the skill by giving comparison of naruto skill. they dont understand that the one reading type moon fanfic is fan who more familiar to type moon lore than naruto. i dont even understand that there is such skill exist lol
Much like Avalon, it serves as a means of preserving one life. Yet, unlike Avalon, which rejects any form of interference, "Iam Redit et Virgo" resembles Izanagi's jutsu from "Naruto," granting Astraea the ability to reverse the course of events. - Discarded12dComentado por
tbh this mc is a lot more fitting as incubus instead of angel
Captured her? What was this? Freaking Pokemon? What the fuck am I doing here? Chasing the skirt of a random farm girl because I knew her of a media I had once consumed. I could be doing something important right now, which would ensure the rest of my eternity. There were some plans I could be realizing right now to ensure my continued existence and instead, I was inside a village in bumfuck nowhere. I couldn't help but sigh, causing Albedo to look at me. - Discarded13dComentado por
with that level of power in possession, how do you write and enjoyable enemy worthy of thst power? all good story revolve around good protagonist and antagonists. if this powerful mc end up author writing a new fic villain just so to content with this level power, it will be boring because it is no more than a new fic borrowing overlord world.
The energy seemed inexhaustible as it continued, supplying me with a steady stream of warm energy. I licked my lips underneath my helmet and just reveled in the feeling of power. I clenched my hand into a fist. Could it be possible that the shackles were the ones my race as a First Sphere angel naturally possessed or had I breached level 100 and entered the realms of a World Boss? Either way, it didn't matter which one it was.