Chapter's good, but the formatting 😩

Brother he did 😩

Okay femboy

Hol' up, this is really interesting.

For me, It's really hard to connect to a character with an ever changing personality, and the MC's an example of it. There should always be an established personality depicted before developing it. The problem for me here is that MC's personality changes suddenly and it just doesn't feel right. It feels like a new character is just abruptly there.

This Arc feels so pointless, what are you needing the other quirks for?

His reasoning is doodoo aids.

Hey Author just a quality of life suggestion for your grammar and spellings, you can simply run your chapter through ChatGPT and Grammarly to at least refine the punctuations, capitalization, and spacing. Nice chapter btw.

If you want to read something just to pass time and turn off your brain, this is somewhat bearable. Suggestions: This needs a lot of editing on its grammar, the tenses doesn't flow well making the reading experience very disconcerting. It also suffers from over description of the minor things; for example the MC is just going to simply park his car but the sentence include how he turns his wheel and how the tire screeches left its mark, like bruh it's fine for some scenes but turn it down a little 'cause I simply skim over it when it's too excessive. I also feel that the dialogues needed some work because it feels off for some reason. I just don't feel the dialogues engaging (that's just for me). For now that's all.

For real, it's a slog to read the chapters. Also this lolbingolol guy is present to all threads that says the things they dislike about this book, and ol' reliable lolbingolol will say something on defense. I dunno if this guy is a religious c*ck s*cker of the author or just the author's alt account.

Are you the author's alt account? You seem so invested on trying to reason out any criticisms in the reviews.

Hey Author, just a quality of life suggestion, you can run your paragraphs in Grammarly or even ChatGPT for typographical errors. The most prominent error is the "isent" which should be "isn't". Thanks for the chapter btw.

The quality took a massive nosedive.

Holy sh.. , I just binged this for two says and didn't realized I already caught up. Love you Author~~

Please come back 😣

Daddy where you at? I miss your translation already😭

I really like your determination.

Truuu, the author could have made a better character template so that all the things he do won't be so weird.

Sorry for the typo there auto-correct did its thing again.