another banger chapter by the main man

for a moment i thought mc received Yahweh's inheritance. cus you know "Let there be light"

this is the third novel with the same type of cliffhanger and its infuriating me, all of them are good but it always ends on the most interesting parts.

+1

honestly this lost my interest in the third chapter in the second chapter they are talking to the mc as if they know his future the dialogue feels unnatural, there is no development of character in the second chapter or third with the mother and sister is as if they only know how to kingdom business. What I mean is that there no natural feeling to how a family should feel. Then the icing on the cake taking the mc as a 4 year old to practice combat, bruh.

BROOOOOOOOO ANOTHER CHAPTER HAS COME

The story is good, but so far it is just a summary of a story like a recap with i think 3 chapters with actual dialogue when I read it......

or hear me out get the ki engine she stole

NICE another chapter

this is like trying to read what a moron does even if he has all information beforehand.

this is not a story of lander macho but a summary of what he does in a AU marvel dc world. . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .

let his personal life be ruined by shitty trash tier anime loli ffs rly first they send pictures to incriminate him and later ruin his family life then he let's himself be walked all over by them and get cucked. this review came from reading those parts and leaving a bad taste in my mouth and I just skipped the Naruto arc cus it was boring

The writing is good but i do not know where this story is developing to and I just got bored reading it at chapter 10, I may have skimmed chapter 1 so probably characters are designed good but i do not care if the story does not interest me.

Honestly i share the opinions of almost everyone on this fic, i don care if emma finds out about his reincarnation, after all it something between his wife and him, what I don't get it s the stubbornness of trying to basically commit suicide twice, supposedly he has knowledge of marvel comics, be he just has to rush shaw twice with a GUN bitch that does nothing, and the biggest plotholes come from the beginning, he reincarnated but and took medical classes again but he saw nothing about captain america which is fucking obvious he was a ww2 hero there may be history classes but nooo he is so fucking oblivious, and then after emma is coerced next chapter he is talking to magneto and i am like when did that happen, and this type of stuff will keep repating themselves. So to me this is not worth reading and mtl novel seems better since atleast that have the plot figured out even if the translation is ass good thing this fic is over so i basically did not miss anything that could have changed my opinion.

This is the lowest I could reasonably give while being biased against it. They story is great for a slice of life, you could honestly remove the copyrighted names and the whole supernatural stuff and fighting scenes and you would get a standard slice of life novel. The bad parts which could probably be just me, I hate Rangiku characteristic and and any cool thing that appears in chapters that appears as a tease, never arrives and I am left skimming the boring stuff. Because honestly i am more interested in what sort of stories could come from involving yoruichi, shelly, and even that oc ruben because he looks more interesting that any other character, like that ramen girl, and that girl clerk. The silverman gym is good to goof off the kda stuff could be a more interesting, and the romantic stuff is problably more interesting to see it develop and mature with them than rangiku and cana, and I am by chapter 69 and it is not even on the school part yet which was insinuated I think 20+ chapters ago. The worst part is that this author is putting actions scenes with a slice of life tag, which gets me exited and then when I reached the part which insinuates more actions is just a time skip and that really putts me off, because the author just enticed me with action and good characters that seem interesting to me and is stuck with the characters that I personally dislike which really did not help with my earlier expectations. If this was just slice of life and no action I could probably understand and bear reading about the characters I dislike. So I started skimming to see if there was anything of interest because of it and I could not bear read it anymore because of it. And don't tell me I should not read slice of life if i do not like it. There are some slice of life that are better than some actions that I really enjoyed and honestly my own expectations did not do me any favors

Honestly its one timeskip after another, all I understood was that a bunch of people got bit by the spider then everything else is just gibberish because i do not understand wtf is going on.

(this is a reply to your deleted comment) I will just say that I have read many styles of writing and have seen the many archetypes of yandere among other things, I will not try to add anything to my own review to justify, because it could have just been my mood in the morning but something about it irked me and in combination with how the mc is portrayed it made me have a bad mood so just put a review because of it, the writing style probably had nothing to do with it. So if I feel like reading this again I will probably try to give a fairer review.

I was interested by the title and description but I felt let down, from my own expectations and besides I read fic with yanderes that were not as obnoxious before so maybe I set my expectations high before. do you want me to leave a good review saying its just good, 5 stars ? I just wrote what it came to my mind when I read it this morning. I Obviously did not like it, but if it makes you feel better your grammar was good and your writing is easy to understand.

idk why this has high ratings this fic makes me feel uncomfortable reading it. the yandere is obnoxious instead of interesting. and finally my personal preference i dislike the Mc.

I honestly just typed what I thought about my experience from reading this , but I will be honest at least what you write is readable and easy to understand, I know people may not have a good grasp of what to write at first when they begin, since I took a creative class before and it took me almost a whole year to write something I was sure myself of what I was doing and where I wanted to take it, even then it came out as a 8 page word essay that is just a summary of what happens on the first few chapters and with back story plastered on it like it was going out of style, and took some good plots from manga I liked and tried to make my own, and let me tell you at least yours is more interesting than the garbage I wrote, mine would fit in one of those obscure novel websites as a trash book. So at least you have that going for yourself.