Nawaabzadah

isn't this plagiarism of cultivating through hundred lifetimes to ascension

you fkr should write that brain chip instead of brain.

looks like in actuality it's the author whose brain is shut down the when writing

shouldn't that be like " I greet the lord and young master"?

concept is good like using modern knowledge in different world but writing quality is worst.

the hell is this stuff. author is stupid MC is stuuuuupid. plot armor isn't making any sense. there's no coherency, author lacks style and vocabulary and doesn't understand how to link different scenarios together. author keeps repeating certain things at the start and end of every para.

enough with repeating it at every turn.

and what's wrong with characters names? no focus on those errors.

if there's a mistake in the description then you can imagine the low quality of the story itself.