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YourMaster

YourMaster

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2018-05-06 JoinedGlobal
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  • YourMaster
    YourMaster12 days ago
    Replied to Yokashi

    I agree with the guy who called you lot mentally ill, lol. It seems you completely lost the complexity of characters and their motivations. Cassie did all of this to save them all, and it was only a matter of time until Sunny becomes someone's slave. And there's no one better as a master than Nephis, who's pretty much a saint and was ready to give up her future and life for his sake. How close minded and dumb can you people be to miss this? Did you read too much xianxia where MC just fucks every girl and kills everyone who looks at him the wrong way? He's a slave only in name, and he was destined to become one the moment he got his aspect.

  • YourMaster
    YourMaster2 years ago
    Replied to Devilkr_17

    What about "no harem" and 500+ confessions makes you think that the MC can be anything but a complete SIMP? xD

  • YourMaster
    YourMaster3 years ago
    Replied to Atrius_Beng

    No. 2+2=0 There are different numeral systems.

  • YourMaster
    YourMaster3 years ago
    Posted

    I don't really hate this story, but let's be honest. The writing is at the level of a 12-year-old kid who decided to write a story of his own. In fact, I bet that many 12-year-olds would do a better job. The beginning and the premise are completely copied from a Korean novel with a similar name. The main character is one-dimensional while the side characters are ZERO-dimensional. This story and system are so simple that even someone with a 70 IQ would understand it easily. There are plot holes starting from the first chapter. There the MC said something like "I hope that I'll awaken a useful ability"... But in fact, in this world, there are no abilities to awaken, lol. If you aren't facepalming at most of his decisions then let me congratulate you - you've passed this IQ test with 80 points! Yay! So why is this popular? I think that this story, Vampire System, and Cultivation Online show you what you need to succeed at Webnovel. Op protagonist, a fast pace so that he could show off how OP he is, fast release rate so that people could get addicted to your story. That's it. Other people waste their words by trying to write a story that makes sense, the only one who managed to get to the top with such an approach is the author of Supreme Magus.

  • YourMaster
    YourMaster3 years ago
    Replied to UnderRated_Reader1

    Because if a story is a trash in the first 30 chapters then why you should endure it until it gets better?

  • YourMaster
    YourMaster3 years ago
    Replied to Nightamer

    IDK, man... Suicide can be only a choice if you, for example, terminally ill and suffer every day because of extreme pain. Mental suffering can always be overcome, just because your gf died doesn't mean that you can't move on and continue with your life. In many stories, it even serves as a starting point for the MC to start his journey.

  • YourMaster
    YourMaster3 years ago
    Replied to Leicchi

    "THE GIRLS HAVE THEIR OWN THOUGHTS AND THEY AREN'T BLINDLY FELL IN LOVE WITH THE MC." Lol, are you sure that you've read the same novel I did? Pretty much all women fall in love with the MC without any development. Or, rather, they fall in love with his dick.

  • YourMaster
    YourMaster3 years ago
    Replied to Cloudelka

    Lol, he's already started to CULTIVATE in the real world and it's only a matter of time before he cures his illness. But it wouldn't be soon, it would make things too boring otherwise. Knowing this author, the MC would get healed after 400 chapters or so.

  • YourMaster
    YourMaster3 years ago
    Posted

    So far it's much better than Dual Cultivation, unless you are here for *** scenes. Harem is good, but if I wanted to read about ***, I would just check some hentai. In terms of how interesting it is, this story is one of the best on webnovel and ratings prove it. Unlike DuCu, this story follows a weak to strong plot and while the MC is OP, his power feels fair, and, so far, cultivations levels are consistent. The best thing this author does it making us anticipate how the MC would show off his talent while being partially ignorant about it and not understanding what's the big deal. The MC is a nice little fellow and though his personality is kind of bland, he isn't annoying. There's no deep world-building, complex plot or well-developed characters, but you are here not for that anyway, right? It's one of the greatest wish-fulfilling stories with OP MC and the fact that it's the number one sponsored story on the whole site proves it. It kind of reminds me of the story named Number One Under Heaven. There, the MC is even more OP and almost as much innocent, but the problem with that story was that he was already the strongest in the world, literally. Plus, his character was kind of inconsistent. To the first-time readers, I would advise waiting for a few months before there would be more chapters, otherwise, you'll need to hungrily wait like everyone else.