I take a longer story with a short update time then a short story with a short update time.

Need more

Why are almost all of the mc characters you create losing body parts ?

Some people are just born lucky

Mr blue lab has a lot more blood.

"And trunks that was how you were born"

Please change the nickname for mutants 🙏

Why x-rounder? it's more annoying to say then mutant.

This was short

They jjk jump him

You should make a paetron you have the best Halo Fanfic out there (Maybe only)& a discord. Got a couple of questions though are you going to do some more genetic alteration form eternal youth or Clone body hopping.

You should get a paetron or discord and is he going to expand an train on his water bending abilities.

That was ..... . . . . Bye 👋

That seem rushed to fill in plot hole and character development 🤔. This mix of a character is really confusing. If you want a path for him that see like it seems suited for him look up SCP Mekhane.

Why are you trying to nerf so bad

Tenchi muyo this animation doesn't get the credit it deserves.

What race us he ?

Well creating a paetron is smart. If you write multiple stories and a decent price it can workout l.

This is a great story 👍

I wouldn't deny all three become pregnant with successful half vultrimite kids. That be funny seeing Mark tryna manage all the being prego. Epically Harley.