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I hate his name. John in itself is fine. but pokemon as the last name? mega ugh.
it's not Flint thoug?
Honestly, I don't see him having any talent at all. He's been relying on op system handouts and advantages.
Hermione uses it to freeze nevile in the first book.
I'd do the sylveon evolution as it easily can be chalked up to accidental circumstances
honestly, it looks super sloppy. if you must go for unknown gender... it and they are a better way of doing this.
I don't mind making Pikachu female, but please correct the pronouns if you are going to do so. consistent inconsistencies like this are what kills the story.