RayDKing

Great chapter my man 👍 keep up the great work

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Yeah

I wish bro, :) But, unfortunately it will keep on happening since it my first story and also because I’m dyslexic and can’t see when I’m doing a spelling mistakes :) so your help is really appreciated bro :)

Fixed :)

Fixed :)

Zoro thought SharpTongue is working for bryan but realized that he isn’t.

Hello your paragraph comments isn’t showing which paragraph has the problem.

And the last one thanks bro :)

Fixed :)