I really like the insights in this work. It touches ideas and subjects that are often ignored and taken for granted by most, especially regarding depression and racism. The author has a good sense with their use of words, my only comment would be that the concept and construction are all-over the place. I understand that some parts are memories, but I don't get why new characters are suddenly introduced or the settings suddenly changed. It's very confusing. But overall I think it's a good and eye-opening read. Kudos!