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What ever happened to the other three that he straight up r*ped, they just vanished? Especially when they supposedly will die if not within a kilometer of the MC for at least an hour a day... And here he is, kidnapped and far away... so, they dead yet?

I'd have really liked to see the author try and have the MC "explain" exactly how the "gentleman" they knew and loved suddenly r*ped a girl no one liked and now said girl will likely be a part of his "harem". Bro in no way had to go that route... shoulda just killed her.

Story started out great and I always love the concept of monster girls but then the author abruptly threw in mind control and r*pe out of nowhere... like wtf

Anddd the author finally lost it, great. What a convenient and scummy way to keep a girl that pretty much no one liked around the MC. How disappointing.

Welp, it was fine for a while until it got to the ending with Anastasia's "little" joke. It's kinda fucked that she would joke about rejecting his confession and in reality, most sane guys would let it be and that relationship would've been ruined and over before it even started... all because of a joke...

This started off well but it lost me at the transition between the beach scene with Himawari and their relationship at the carnival the next day. And the fact that she slapped him for his response to what she said peeved me too. Not making me feel confident for the rest of the novel.

This chapter doesn't seem that bad until I remember that they're both still kids...so this is kinda f**ked...like bruh

Yep, considering how Selena tricked Lux before but it was barely glossed over after the fact, I still really don't like Selena.Bella's not my favorite either, always feels full of herself and treating Lux like a child despite the fact that he's supposedly the most respected figure on Earth.Definitely not my favorite pair, I can tolerate Bella but I'd sock Selena in the face if I could.

Cannot understand a thing, the grammar is horrid. The idea sounded interesting but it was just too difficult to understand a majority of the text to the point that the meaning behind it was lost.

The concept for this story is cool but the execution just wasn't there sadly. It started out fine which minor errors in grammar but negligible. Unfortunately the relationships weren't fleshed out at all and felt forced from the start. Also the idea that the MC's gun has a mildly infuriating personality while having access to his inner thoughts irked me to no small degree. I just wish the relationships were done a little better.