Fearmongering

I really enjoyed the story so far, I really can not find any complain about the story. The character are lifelike, the grammar is nothing to scoff at. Author, I really like your story, so make sure you keep on making the story even more awesome.

Great novel, the first chapter pulled me in, would recommend to fantasy lovers of all kinds, the main character is cool, and the world building is decent.

thats one of the problems old Born and Torn has sadly

Nope he is not, I think

What a promising start to a novel, I can not help but wonder how the story will develop with a system. I really liked the characters and the way the opening was used to establish the setting. If you are looking for a good read, this novel looks promising.

I really like the world-building here. The premise of this book harbours a lot of potential. The characters, despite seeing so little of them, seem almost too real. I can't wait to find out what happens next. Thank you for writing this great story author!

The beginning was unexpectedly gripping. I can not help but wonder how great this story will become in the future if it is already this fun at just 3 chapters in. Looking forward to reading more in the future.

Great read, with deep characters and an interesting premise. I can not wait to see how it will develop. I love the worldbuilding and the powers shown so far. Keep it up author!

I was quite surprised. This format is certainly rather unique in the world of webnovels. It manages to depict a story of flawed perspectives through the lenses of a young boy and their relationship with his mother. What starts out as misplaced anger slowly transforms into something beautiful. I applaud the author for his impression and depiction of this change that happened over the time of a life span. The writing quality itself is superb and does really fit the premise of the story. The themes are really deeply explored despite the short actual length of the novel. The characters are really lifelike albeit we only see them as passing figures that develop alongside the main characters. The drawn parallels are truly a remarkable idea to showcase the development. In the end, I can only truly pay my respect for this work. Really well done.

Interesting mix of wuxia and xianxia. New twist on transmigration trope. Very cool original take on cultivation and its power systems. The poetry is a nice touch and the character dialogues are well-written as well.