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Any chance you can start posting this on another site? Webnovel seems to now be requiring app usage for everything. I can't even read when logged into my account in the web browser.

I also had to bite my hand to stop myself from laughing and waking up everyone else in the house!

Liking the story so far but I really think you need to do something about how Miles and Coin are approaching things here. They could die, they have seen others die. They realize this but instead of utilizing the available resources they are doing nothing but constantly throwing themselves into danger. Miles could use the mind serum but is avoiding getting it for no discernible reason even thought it would likely increase his chances of survival. They are stockpiling money with no goal in mind instead of buying equipment/orbs that could save their lives. You have portrayed Miles as being relatively smart, and Coin is a fricken AI who has a primary directive of keeping Miles alive. Why are neither of them taking it seriously?

With as highly she appears to think of the saints it doesn't make too much sense that she would attack one of their disciples. I will be pretty annoyed if the MC gives her any information.

Thanks for the chapter. You are asking for comments so here is mine. You are basically writing duplicate that offer no additional information. By the first Yuan Meng POV chapter where she was back at school we already knew that people didn't recognize her and that there was an increased level of carnal interest in her. I don't feel anything was added by effectively repeating these facts 3 (+?) times. Otherwise I am enjoying your story but it feels slow due to the above being done regularly.

This is just frustrating to read. First, all of the character names are mismatches of someone google searching "top 20 American first names" and "top 20 American last names". It is super frustrating to read when every single character has a name that I would expect to see as a place holder on a police report involving minors. Second is that it absurdly draws out conflicts. It is a constant seesaw between the MC getting harassed and then getting some form of minor revenge. There is also an absurd focus on side characters, even their POVs, considering we can be sure they aren't going to play any major role outside of the current conflict they are involved in with the MC. Speaking of conflict, this is another majorly frustrating aspect. The MC is described as a hardworking, kind, and loyal man. The entire novel is just him being defecated on repeatedly.

Holy sh**. I mean I sort of saw this coming but when Eric rejected Lily you basically confirmed it. Still, I was in disbelief and suspense. All I can do now is applaud you.

Styx was arrogant, that much is obvious. We can only hope he learns from his mistake moving forward.

It is almost cliche in a way but might makes right. It doesn't matter whether she has the moral high ground or not. She is stronger so she can enforce her will. It is clear that Eve is just trying to take advantage of the situation to gain benefits, but it does not appear that she was the one who made the situation. The real question is will the god/goddess who resurrected Styx standby and let Eve do what she wants? I can't wait to see what happens!

I wrote that comment when I read that chapter. I have since caught up on the story and you basically resolved the issue as of where the story is right now and it didn't take hundreds of chapters like it does in other novels. The trope is frustrating because it makes the one thing a character almost always has control over, their mind/thoughts, and strips that from them. This can be useful when used as a plot device to further a specific goal but when it is a persistent facet of a story it can become extremely annoying. I am quite happy with how you dealt with it and that as mentioned you didn't take hundreds of chapters to do so.