in my own opinion this novel is good hope to see more of this thanks

I really commend the author for this new kind of concept in a novel I really love it please continue in doing a good job and create more new concept novels I really appreciate your works thank you

please create more wonderful works maybe in different genre thank you for creating wonderful works that helps us past through this pandemic without boredom I sincerely appreciate your work

I hope to see more good books from you please create more sorry for I'm not giving you gifts even I like your book I'm just relying on free pass to read your novels maybe next time if I find a job still thank you

a pretty interesting novel it's good in every angle in my opinion author please keep it up and to all who help made this novel reach we novel keep up the good work add more of this kind of novel sincerely I thank you

an interesting novel author I sincerely thank you for making this novel so that we can have something good to read I hope to see more of your creations I'm sorry if I'm just relying on free pass and can't support you monetarily

I hope the author would not stop halfway I kindly ask you to finish your novel even one chapter a month is better than nothing I sincerely thank you for your hard work

keep up the good work author I hope to see more of your works try to read other novels or watch movies anime to get inspiration to create more wonderful works

a really great novelist for my opinion although your stories are short but it very good and interesting I sincerely commend your work keep is up just fix some of the use of English word like spelling but everything is good hope to see more of your creations sincerely yours SelfishReader

please find time to fix the use of english word the story is good but the editor or writer made some mistakes in using english words just my opinion I don't want to offend you but what I'm saying is a fact I hope you can continue your love of making novel take this as a practice

a good story and storyline but the needs to finish the novel seen many good novel that is not finished always please finish the novel and just write at your own pace

author no matter what criticism and other negative things people say just focus on the path you chose for the novel and promise to finish it so the ones that love your novel will be satisfied just satisfy those who wants to ignore those who don't want to

just make the story revovle around the family of three don't put to much side story if possible and continue this great novel till you finish the story please

first of all this novel is very good it has a very good story development good world background very accurate writing quality and also very good character design but please increase the effieciency of update and the story is also good focusing to mc giving limelights to side character sometimes although the mc has a god of cookery system but the story does not focus on cooking and adding more to it this is what you call a true story just because you have a system of cooking youll focus on cooking this novel is more of overall development not focusing in one path this is what I like about it has a little kingdom building harem farming healing others being a warrior being a good father and more author keep up the good work read more of other peoples novels or travel the world to gain more inspirations ideas FOR ME NOVEL WRITER SHOULD NEVER GET TIRED OF ACQUIRING KNOWLEDGE AND EXPERIENCES IN LIFE STRIVE TOO BE THE BEST IN WHAT YOU ARE GOOD AT