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ShuYme7dPublicado porThe problem with this fic is that the author just writes huge blocks of text excruciatingly detailing every single nuance of every single interaction, it’s so boring. Nothing is happening and when it does happen the amount of detail detracts from the impact it would have had if the author had been more succinct in his writing
- ShuYme7dComentado porCh 2 The Silent Game with the Fifth Elder
- ShuYme10drespondió a Nyxio
He could make his bones hollow like that of birds and spin Huge blades of bone quickly like a helicopter or a thin flexible membrane of bone with sturdier bones as a frame and flap them rlly quickly and with a lot of force. Maybe that would work
The brainstorm didn't stop there. I thought about shooting bone projectiles, making bone shields, creating bone wings for short flights, and even forming bone spikes from the ground to trap enemies. The ideas kept coming, and I felt more and more pumped as I jotted them down. - ShuYme11dComentado por
Story was good up until this point, then it kinda lost the plot, but i guess with mark being so powerful the rest of the origional invincible plot would be kinda unusable
"Then we have a stop to make." I smiled, "Have you ever been to Kathmandu?" - ShuYme11dComentado por
Dogs actually like the smell of feces, so i would imagine wolves do too
Four days later, I could see King's Landing in the distance and I told Fenrir to slow down as the smell hit us both. "Oh boy, if this is how strong the smell of shit is this far away, Fenrir might just die when we make it to the city," I thought as I looked at Fenrir trying to bury his nose in the ground. Taking pity on my friend, I just touched his fur and dampened his sense of smell to a huge margin, and I did the same to myself. He looked a lot better now, but was still uncomfortable at having one of his main senses dulled. But there wasn't much I could do at the moment and it would only be for a few days if everything goes according to my plan. - ShuYme12dComentado porCh 89 Chapter 1 (Revamped)
- ShuYme17drespondió a CMDR_Palps
The force is such a cop out i think, it ruins Stories because it takes the agency away from the characters, so a non force sensitive character would be nice
Etc. - ShuYme22dComentado por
No they dont?
In terms of rank, they stand no lower than their Marine counterpart, the Admiral. - ShuYme28dComentado porCh 1 Birth of a King
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- ShuYme1mthrespondió a Kurotora
Or, fluctuate, vary, extend, differ etc.
"Statement: That was another warning. I hope it has gotten through that skull of yours that if you speak without permission I will electrocute you. And the duration of the electrocution each and every time you speak without permission. Query: Do you understand?" HK-47 spoke. - ShuYme1mthrespondió a PrinceOfNilfheim
I like this one
It was a decently-sized dragon, with regal features and smooth scales. Its scales were dark purple with lines of gold. (Picture in comments.) - ShuYme1mthComentado por
Pls release ur dump
Let me know if you would prefer irregular large chapter dumps on here when I have the time or if you'd rather I just make them free and public to everyone on Patreon in an even larger chapter dump. - ShuYme1mthPublicado por