Animetine

why do they all have to be bitches? the term isn't endearing. Maybe let up on all the bitch this bitch that oh this bitch.

honestly, rereading your chapters up to the current one I can say for certain I liked the old pace and story better. You fell into the most common trope of authors ever. You listened to readers who know nothing about creativity. Just do you next time. Your story is good, people are always going to find something to complain about, perfection isn't real and you're not beholden to peoples petty whims. welcome back and keep up the good work.

bro, I thought exactly this the minute I ended the chapter. like he could be training whatever ability he gets. random draws are exactly that, random. no sense in holding off unless the story is littered with deus ex machina and the author wants to dunk on someone.

Just for reference the coin is necessary. Electro "Magnetic" railgun, they shoot slugs at sub sonic speeds using electricity. You literally need the coins cause they were a specific tungsten alloy for her electricity to launch. If you're gonna steal work, know what you're stealing.

no dickgirl. bad author.

don't most hispanic moms use mijo? Hijo is like informal or something right?

I fee like the author does a good job of background for people who don't quite know who the author has chosen to emulate with their MC. The writing quality is also top tier for the site but there are some errors here and there. The powers and scaling feel pretty equal with the Marvel universe to a believable level. The story also progresses with a steady pace and I am already falling in love with the story. I am definitely looking forward to see how the story progresses going forward. A++++ author-san please don't drop <3

The writing quality of the story definitely reads like some lame chinese translation. With all the usual culprits, like certain wording, its especially noticeable in the hero exam chapters with the whole *imaginary robot* thing and the green skinned robots. Also All mights disciple? please, that's so dumb. Updates seem ok? but its early and I think there is a lot of suspicion of this being a stolen translated work. Story development is terrible if I am being honest, the MC seems to be trying to be that cringey "cool" guy in most chinese fics. Also the typical thug types with the extras? This goes hand in hand with the Character design, I personally feel the Main character gets his powers too soon, I feel we would have liked a more drawn out skill progression story where he explores his abilities instead of becoming impossibly strong from the very beginning. Obviously the world background here doesn't really matter with pre-established ground work laid out by the creators of MHA. Overall I think my review if fair for this work, the author, if this work truly isn't stolen or a translation work I would look into rewriting the story, it has a lot of potential with a unique powerset that I feel is honestly more well explored in line with the power progression of the story.

+1

really should edit this one. seems weird to repeat what she said. don't let the ai do all the work.