Artist1905

I've been really enjoying this fanfic. A fresh look on an old idea, and it's executed quite well. My only suggestion would be to focus a bit more on other characters too, as of the current chapter, the world of the novel seems to be wholly tied to the MC, feels a bit suffocating.

Love the changes you made to the story, really love your original character, and Luna is so adorable that i just loved the whole story straight away. I wished for a bit more Flitwick involvement rather than Mcgonagall, being a Ravenclaw fic and all, but i guess it can't all hit perfect. The last few chapters have been very nice and sets up a lot of mystery, can't wait to read more.

Literally 0 reason to do this, i can feel the quite literal pain in my chest with every line of this chapter. What a disappointment.

yep, they are perfect for eachother

date, how cute

i like this. Fate can be funny, hope they dont waste too much time before getting together

I hope you come back soon, i can't wait for more of this novel.

please not guns, just use a bow.

i'm sorry, stupidity has a limit.

It might not be the best writing quality, or plot twisting and incredible world building. But the characters make it the best xianxia on this site. They are just amazing, and i love all of them. Su Changyu deserved his own novel.