If there's anything frustrating to read, it's a sexual scene with infinite provocation, 5/6 chapters, it doesn't end....too many filler.

It is not a question of order or punishment, military betrayal is responded to with execution regardless of what the superior thinks, it is not possible to trust an "ally" who has already betrayed you once, your life can and will be sold again and you will be stabbed by the back in the future.

An officer without the power of voice, a subordinate who not only confronts but also imposes a position on a superior, this does not exist, in military service, a superior has a voice and absolute power, this talk about others being with rage and etc. is ridiculous, the captain should send this Harry guy to a distant and isolated place so he can learn to obey a superior in silence or arrest him for insubordination.

If the previous potion increased the power from 6200 to 16200, remember that the greater the power, the greater the need for actions for it to continue increasing, the average potion in theory would be something like going from 6200(D) to 26200 or more , until 30000, the need to continue growing is much greater, so it only went from 31400 to 41400.

There are some paths for those who suffer what Nami suffered, think, in a minimally realistic world in OP, at least Nami would have already been captured, and everything worst would have happened to her, being alive would be lucky, so, the fact of empathy her being null here, shows one of the results of someone in her initial situation in this world.

Although I agree that the Hyugas are internal slavers, I find the FF community's position of making Hinata's father an enemy hater ridiculous, it is clear in the canon that he always tried to do what he could for Hinata, he was handcuffed and limited by the customs of the clan and his position as patriarch, he NEVER treated Hinata with hate, anger, hopelessness and abandonment, he just chose her sister because she was more qualified as a successor to the position of leader, which Hinata was not, hence his disapproval and this exaggerated hatred for Incurring pity on the FML is ridiculous on the part of the authors.

------------Português---------------------------------------- Sinto falta do choque de realidade, do desespero da mudança, da impacto que isso causa, pensa, se mudar de casa na mesma cidade ja é desnorteador, imagina todo um mundo de diferença, TUDO desconhecido e conhecido apenas atraves de palavras ou uma tela, pensa no peso emocional disso, sinto falta disso nos MCs que transmigram ou reencarnam, os autores simplismente anulam essa mudança e dano que ela pode causar de forma abrupta na mente dos personagens. ---------English--------------------------- I miss the shock of reality, the despair of change, the impact it causes, think, moving house in the same city is already disorienting, imagine a whole world of difference, EVERYTHING unknown and known only through words or a screen, think about the emotional weight of this, I miss that in MCs who transmigrate or reincarnate, the authors simply nullify this change and the damage it can cause abruptly in the characters' minds.

Não seria, "só PRECISO exercitar eles"?

I know the author wants Orochimaru for something in the future, but this is getting ridiculous, the characters just don't die, there's no point in him being able to escape, Kabuto invades an entire village and kidnaps the son of the leader of a clan like Uchiha, every hole gets worse, I've been loving reading but these situations make reading less and less enjoyable, just finish things without forcing, orochimaru should have died in the fight against kushina and her sensei, at the beginning of the novel, even now, he ran away even though he could be captured....

Oh God, sentient systems are pure and annoying freaks, apart from the trash personalities they attribute, Tsundere/Yandere, my god, what are the chances of being one of the MC's women in the future?

KKKKKKKKKK Brasileiro em qualquer comunidade relatado AKSJALKSJ

TFTC

In another comment I address the issue of the MC's mentality, no one is born with this type of mentality, so either the MC is a transmigrator from the world of DS or, he was introduced to this but, as said before, he was sold into slavery by Take into account the peculiarities he has, such as his stronger physique and the marks on his face... I doubt they would have instilled any mentality in him if they were to sell him as a slave, which translates into a life of being avoided/mocked/attacked... No one becomes a pacifist just because they are called "Yoruichi"...that's my point.

I should say flowery and beautiful words to you, but honestly I'm not a fan of yours or know you well enough as an author, but if you don't have the ability to tolerate haters, then maybe public posting isn't your ideal place, exposing yourself and exposing your work as amateur writing subjects you to this, if you are going to freak out and throw a tantrum at every hater who decides to test your patience, then you shouldn't be here, leaving your work open and even worse, giving morality and attention for these people... Crying and making drama doesn't change the fact that you don't know how to deal with the pressure... Seek advice from someone who has been dealing with this for longer than you, maybe it will help, maybe not, the important thing is to try always be better.

I've never read or watched DS, although I know a lot from the social media and what people tell me, but no, I don't know, I evaluated it purely from the point of view of someone meeting it for the first time and I approached the issue of age precisely for that reason, as far as I know, in DS, Yorich is mature because of his past, loss of his family, taking care of his sister, responsibility and his father's teachings, in this fanfic, his father sold him into slavery so I doubt he had that part of teaching, we don't know about his mother or sister but as it's been years and nothing addressed, I doubt they exist, do you understand why I questioned this MC's "high" morality?

Sasuke in canon lost his entire family and everyone in his clan, yet he did not awaken the sharingan, there is a necessary component called bodily maturity, the body of a 6 year old child would not support the sharingan, even Itachi, a talent almost never seen before , he awakened his at the age of 8 after countless emotional experiences... I doubt that the death of one person can trigger a reaction that forces the sharingan, much less in an arrogant immature 6-f*cking-year-old brat.

Blatant plagiarism, this is the author's novel “EroJaki” with more than 270 chapters, people like you are the cancer of the amateur community, disgusting thief.