Bromelth

Many grammar errors mis genderings and spelling errors

So as of chapter 150 I was absolutely loving this novel, Chapter 151 I am dropping it. Really great read till there though. My problem is it’s a magical world with all kinds of magic/elemental based skills and you introduce guns and try to give them a ranking to make them powerful and it kinda ruins the immersion and flow. And negates the archers and crossbows. Good luck to anyone who reads pst 151 and keeps paying .

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Biggest complaint is author states how guns and such don’t work outside of the zone so teaches MC to use a staff and be powerful then literally gives him magic guns. This ruined the immersion for me and is the reason I quit reading.

I give this a one star due to the poor grammar and it making it unbearable to read

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