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Being a Hero in their model sucks, it's better to be an anti-hero or be inspired by classical heroes like the Greeks or even from other places, in these heroes the blood of evil was not lacking, unlike these modern heroes, I'm not talking about killing for minor crimes, but certain things deserve the punishment that is due.

Mutant, the x gene does not make the person stop being a human as a basic race, to justify him being half something else he must be like another race, like a semi-God or angel, devil, Atlantean, anything like that.

Some interesting character models: Aragorn from Lord of the Rings, Wolverine from Marvel, Jason from Percy Jackson, Neville from Harry Potter, young Merlin from the TV series, you can take some druids, paladins and wizards from Warcraft and Diablo, they are all human, but they would make great potential.

That's why I once said that he should be very honest, explain how he felt and the fact that he may have girlfriends or wives, but that he wouldn't go out with just any woman, and that he would love them regardless, but they had to decide if they were able to accept that, especially considering that he was immortal and that he made him immortal too. Even if he dated someone he had known since he was little, for an immortal that was nothing, because as soon as she was of age, the age difference was irrelevant. He needed to have this conversation to end fights or arguments or useless and unpleasant situations. That's what a real man would do, not be a scoundrel or a coward.

The ideal is to do this and accumulate chapters, try to have 50 to 100 chapters in reserve to avoid overloading yourself, writing should be a pleasure and not something tiring.

Take some time to watch animation, series and movies, maybe read a little. Then put on a good soundtrack and start writing, taking time to make notes and things like that to avoid creating logical or plot holes. This can help

Don't try to embrace the whole world at once, focus on writing a good story and finishing it, most people start writing and don't finish it, be someone who is organized and focused.

For the artificial intelligence, combine a bit of Jarvis, Alfred, Sebas, and the appearance and a bit of the characteristics of Alucard from Hellsing.

If this is a translation, it's a shame my comments didn't reach the original author.

The world of Warcraft is connected to other worlds, The Witcher also has a connection, so much so that humans and elves and several beings are not native to these worlds, Diablo opens this possibility too, why am I saying this? Well, these worlds have similar themes and could connect to this world in a logical way, and ultimately we would have more epic adventures, with all due respect to the work that the author has been doing, mainly to connect this world to Skyrin, but the story has potential for more.