dukroger

Authors of online works need to read more physical books and get inspired, the so-called "chapters" online are not comparable to a page or two including front and back.....this makes the rhythm of reading discontinuous.

His mother? If he is someone who reincarnated and only recovered the memories of the past life now, that is correct, but if he transmigrated to a body in a coma without a soul, then it is not worth it, even the parents from a biological point of view, but otherwise they would not have a strong bond.

My recommendation is that they are a mix of Nemurian from Lord of the Rings, with a super soldier and have a stable variant of the x gene. Just remembering that the super soldier's brain capacities are also great. A tip, the DNA strand instead of the standard, can be quadruple, instead of the helix format it will be almost a rope, this can explain the superior characteristics, longer lifespan, and DNA stability even for genes that give abilities like those of mutants, which in common humans can cause damage or deformation.

Instead of the term Superior, use High, as with High Elves and other races of species that are typically the height of what a race can achieve naturally.

Can I give you some recommendations? The bloodlines should be maintained, of course in the proper proportions. His human side is Nemurian, which gives him certain advantages but nothing exaggerated. Even the Northern Frost Giant, Aesir and Olympian side should give him physical benefits in advance, basically immortality over time, improved magic manipulation and a little divine energy. But since he is young, he received Eva recently. He would be somewhere between Captain America and Spider-Man in terms of physical capabilities. So removing the bloodlines that were integrated was an exaggeration. As for the items, that made sense.

Finally, seriously the MC needs more strategic vision, knowledge is power, and he left his allies in a bit of a complicated situation due to withholding information, even though he has plans, this isn't a game or is it? If he dies or his allies the death would be real right?