MielnVic30

and geting ********* by a bunch of soldier............

well i really hope this not become some cliche story when the MC must save the girl or the girl get to go to the higher realm or they have to separate from each other for the good of the MC and then that become the reason MC became stronger

hmm, the MC was always being protected by someone and not strong enough to do something by his own, i guess it was how the story Will be advance in the future, the MC Will became strong and then someone stronger Will try to attack him and again someone much stronger than the enemy Will protect the MC, and don't forget the side character that Will have bad ending, either it Will be r@pd, killed, humiliated, and along this line to wait for the MC to safe them when it was already to late, not my kind of thing so gonna drop this one, but the development of the story is great so i think most people Will like this story.......

well MC with multiple disorder personality , like some kind of movie i watch years ago, not my kind of thing so gonna drop this one, but your work is amazing so continue your good work, i think many people would like your idea of story, but its not my thing.......

such a great read but then the great technic of clone no Jutsu appear, well not my kind of thing, if you canot please your girl with one P then you better not have a Harem, but its just my thing...... so keep do a good job and write the story i believe many people Will like your story much more than me, anyway great read.....bye, gonna drop this novel

another MC with deep bromance oh how beautiful it was.......

the story is almost the same as the emperor domain, and as far as i know there is almost no novel whose story follows the storyline of the emperor domain novel, so I am very interested in reading it, and how the relationship of the MC and it's maid will it be like in the emperor domain where the MC just collects his harem or do something more productive with them, you know what i mean right.................

authority that what the MC don't have, what the use of strong got lot's of money but don't have any authority in his country, Its like the story of one of the riches man in his country but just because he critic's the country, he get supresed all the same like any other people that don't have authority..........

just write a copy of it and print it outside..........

nice one