the Story is fine but it needs a little bit of Polishing..... there's a bit of mistakes here and there. For Example, The HM "Flash". It was named something else
What the F.....is this coward doing! And you call yourself a Pokémon Champion. He got no Right to have that Title.....Is he just going to ignore the fact that so many Pokémon are dying for real just for some Selfish Reasons
well looks like the rabbit lives for another day......But It won't be long before her Identity got known by everyone now that so many people discovered it