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This is a unique and incredible story, which uses scientific thinking to study magic, as well as having a very good MC for now. There are very few chapters to talk about world building, but I hope it gets better, this story, like the USB one, contains a lot of scientific jargon so not everyone will like it, but it is still an incredible story. .

This is an incredible story that takes common tropes in these types of stories and gives them a very unique twist, the humor is good too; Unless you're one of those offended of s**t who wander around wanting to correct everything according to their way of seeing the world. Those who are not able to take a slightly risque joke and are dedicated to criticizing the story based on this, instead of the plot that although it seems a bit repetitive has very unique and interesting twists. Perhaps the strongest point in the story is the system, which forces the MC to work hard for any gain, with the fabulous way of taking tropes in a new light as second place.

Me too, if that novel only focused on teaching instead of slaps in the face it would be at least a 4.5, as it is now if a lot is a 4.0

Very unique story, with a protagonist who feels truly intelligent who constantly learns, the strategies for battles are very good; they don't always turn out well, but he learns from mistakes and acts accordingly

I love that in this novel the protagonist for once thinks to help and improve all humanity, instead of simply making money and power for himself or becoming a hero who saves a few people, being able to elevate the entire planet.