I havent seen it, so it is appreciated, and I am planning to watch it.

There are also quite a few spelling errors, and vapital letters at the wrong place. All in all, it is rough around the edges, but it is interessting, so I hope you continue writing.

Also also, you wrote im, ”I” is always supposed to be in capital letter when it is used as a pronoun, and there is supposed to be an ’ between i and m, like I’m.

Also, you put a capital letter after a comma, letters after a comma should be lower case ones.

There is not aupposed to be any space between a word and a “?”, “!”, “,”. For example the first sentence goes “… 1 day ?”, it should actually be “… 1 day?”. The same thing is done later with exclamation marks and commas, and should also be fixed.

You are using the wrong pronouns a lot, it is him for males and her for females

Tower of god

Isn’t it impossible to have a innate spirit power of over 10?

It is a part of the glyph semblance that all schnees have.

That last lIne, I laughed so hard. It was beautiful.

I like this novel, it is good. Thanks for the chapter.

Thanks for the chapter, love this book

Thabks for the chapter

Thanks for the chapter

Thanks for the chapter

Thanks for the chapter

Thanks for the chapter!

Personally, I enjoy yuri more. I would however, continue reading this either way, it is an enjoyable and good story.

Merry Christmas

Have you done it yet?