witto

WTF is this author.

This is Andy version of Steven Lee

The fact that all of the girls are hot and can’t work is also only in novel. There could’ve been a couple of them that can work

This arc so long and chapters so tiny.

A sign of effective train system being so cheap

Ok not gonna lie. If your life is fine, you can afford to live and eat well and get family and a house. I don’t think there’s much wrong with it.

Ok, after reading for 200 chapters. There’s a part where the writing slightly drop in term of details but it’s still vastly way better than whatever this site has to offer. This is a slow story about a transmigrated man who wish to grow strong to control his own destiny. He faces many trial and tribulations. He doesn’t always win without sacrifices. It’s a very enjoyable read. The highlight of the story is the dialogue and how personal this story felt. Even minor character can talk and make you feel like they are real people with agendas and personality. Honestly, the fact that this story isn’t higher ranked is beyond me. Perhaps it’s because it’s slow and the world background is a little bit bland compared to others (mostly slow though)

Bruh it’s just a ducking name.

Ok maybe I’m nit picky. What’s the point of this paragraph? Just say I want to improve. Why use double negative to confuse your reader?

I’m going to be harsh here. The writing in this story give me a brain spasm, especially the dialogues. I have no clue why but it feels like 3rd grade is writing this. The flow is weird. The story is alright, each jump from one arc to another is weird and makes no sense why the author is doing it. That’s all, the damn grammar this author is using makes me feel like I’m back in middle school trying to be edgy.