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I only read 7 chapters it's not horrible but I would not say it's great. To enjoy it you have kind of turn your brain off at times. Some misinformation about wolves, time frame is messed up, at one point it seems like he was only born recently then he is almost 3 months old. A bit of nationalism thrown in. A cliche system is added. Worst of all wolves apparently roar in this story.
Wolves nodd their heads? I feel like this is one of those stories where you have to turn off your brain to truly enjoy the story. Puppy wolves are not even 3 months old going on a hunt, especially when it should be 6 months old. Wolves roar. Mc can still speak Chinese. They skipped the whole regurgitation of food for the pups.
I don't think they are even 3 months old
how? The mc's body is bigger and stronger there is no way the little pup could keep up.
I thought they had 3 days not two days of food
I never knew that, but I saw another comment about that. I am also sure that the author could have done simple Google search to fact check and learn what to write but didn't.
walking and running are two different activities
This must be like omniscient 3rd person point of view.
could have used the word scent