Vulkariss

editor you presense is required for the entire chapter. Upsetting that money was spent for this low quality error of using incorrect names.

so immediately after hitting the paywall the translation quality decreases significantly. typical...

why are their thoughts inexplicably. seem very explicably.

Note that even chapters 199 to 201 are missing on qidian.

Like most have said, the first arc is great. Good world building and character development. Struggles after the first arc. MC changes completely in attitude and basically stops grinding his skills. 100 chapters after the first arc and his skills have barely changed. Also, like most have said chapters 199 to 201 are missing, I have had no luck finding the raws to try and read the chapters that way. One very annoying translation error is that the two main opposing faction leaders in the first arc have their names used interchangeably regularly, making it hard to know what's going on and ruins the flow.

The overall story and pacing are solid. The novel suffers from the usual mis spelling of names and random regendering of the typical novel on this site. The true negative of this novel is that the poster starts repeating significant portions of chapters, for example, chapters 646, 652, 654, 660. When this happens, the repeated content is blocking actual content that is totally missed, so when you start the next chapter, you end up completely lost.

except you have to choose a reason code and none of the topics apply

how can the women leave his lap, hide in the corner of the room, and then be back on his lap?

Review at 40 chapters in. The story itself seems to be developing well. The translation quality is where this novel suffers greatly. Different names and terms used for cultivation levels, names, places, and random tense changes often ruin the flow. Expect MLT with little to no editing.

why did his age change? he was 10-11 in the first chapter.