tigerjermaine

what h*** is up with all the chapters

everything about the story was magnificent the ending was just incredible.

why not have him say that the card gives him a report of the creature or item to a certain extent like the more he want to know but the more info he gets from said card the worse of a headache he gets.

I am loving it so far keep up the good work.

story detail and character build up is well written.

fix the bloody chapters

already and alright aren't spelled liked that in the dictionary. it is spelled as all right and all ready

wouldn't she be her daughter and not her sister

would you all relaxe bunch a drama queens🙄

if your not going to stick with creating this book then don't talk about how it's not yours.