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First or Third elder
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As I scanned, I saw that there were less periods per paragraph that it looks like it was a single sentence. It can be fixed. Also there are upper cased letter in the middle of a sentence. The grammar is not all over the place. No errors and was smooth to read. The story is about an overpowered God who choose to be incarnated in his juniors creation. So if you like overpowered mc with a drop of sexy stuff this is your cup of tea.
yes definitely 😂 but it is a perspective kind of maybe😅
This is a mix of cultivation and system genre. Synopsis is well made, preparing the readers to what is to expect. The exchange system is also wonderful. I wonder if the mc will exchange his points to bring a gun to his world?🤔