FlickeringFlame

What I said is that you didn't credit the original author of the fanfic, whose idea you're blatantly ripping off. I'm at chapter 58 and all i see is a rushed up version of the same story. So seya will stop reading this one. And I also used to write fanfics so I'll say this, it's common to copy story concepts but crediting the original author is the ethical thing to do.

The story is the same as a chinese Marvel fanfic, everything the system, the powers, the background of the MC being Jameson's son and having Valentina as the maid is copied. You should have given credits to the original author.

yup

This story has great potential in its world system and over all plot but the blatant Chinese supremacy and prejudice against other races especially japanese makes it hard to follow this story. If you can filter out these parts then this story is quite a good read.

I know XD

I did cut it out as it seemed out of place in this situation. Ty for your input.

yup!

****ed up forced conflict