A figure in the night.
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YOU JUST SAID IT! I WILL SEE RIN-EH-GIN!
That's SUS... If I didn't know better, that C is a U?
I can totally imagine the system giving a reward saying, "and now it's real and permanent!"
I found the raw 火影:入赘日向家,逆转意难平 by Author: 曾几何时的绯夜 translated title: Naruto: Marrying into the Hyuga family, the reversal is hard to accept
Both agree and disagree, but mostly agree... What you said is true compared to most MTL of Chinese to English. I don't disagree with the poison resistance idea per say, but instead I'd like to point you towards something interesting I think I've read from the LNMTL FAQ, our brains can subconsciously fill in the gaps and read garbage with no problems. To OP Reviewer DaoistE8ZyZe: I'd also want to point out that the quality of the avg. readability of many TL works have gone down in recent years, so in contrast, I would rate this work 4/5 and not the 1/5 you did. On that note, I am not even sure if this is a translated or original work, the author should clarify for us.
I had an epiphany when I saw your meme. Rather than him being brainwashed, maybe that dent in his skull is problematic and should be looked at? Why didn't anyone have the balls to point out that the strongest mage should have went to the hospital to get that dent looked at? Did they think, "He's the most powerful magician in the country, he must have his own personal doctors," unaware that he killed the doctor that informed him that he had brain damage...
I thought she couldn't have children due to her lack of vitality? Maybe she just lied to everyone, because she didn't want people to question why she didn't want to restore her clan by having children?
I'll be honest, I feel you've great on world building. However, it's also an info dump, with lots of summaries, so it's not surprising either, regardless, I learned I wasn't as knowledgeable about the anime *The Testament of Sister New Devil* as I thought... I've read a few fan-fictions, and your writing was engaging enough to not lose my interest while reading the info dump, good luck and I hope you continue writing.
Danzo is a smart man in this fanfic.
what a great way to pat yourself on the back...