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lowenlyon13hPublicado pormen it was fine if u put 1 anime/game characters there but weeey too much put everything is a fk anime or game in there there we almotst nothing original. need a character, put Erza there, or rem or the fk remuru, then there is no need for the fk protagonist the being born in first place cause the villains will get clapped whit that Frontline, need a warrior put fk gutts wtf are u planning there it was so fk boring to read that, i usually do not put review but cause yours it was a great theme iIwant to try reading, like i said the fk characters men put original no that bull*** of just take this character of this anime/game and is done
- lowenlyon8dComentado porWhile I was using my power, vibrating it in intervals to generate heat turning myself into a makeshift radiator.
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madara**
The fight continued as the crowd grew, and Mandaram continued to amaze everyone with his incredible fencing ability. The swords clashed and created a music on that field, that until the Lord Commander stepped back a bit, with a satisfied small smile. - lowenlyon1mthComentado por
madre*
The fight continued as the crowd grew, and Mandaram continued to amaze everyone with his incredible fencing ability. The swords clashed and created a music on that field, that until the Lord Commander stepped back a bit, with a satisfied small smile. - lowenlyon1mthComentado por
I'm confused it's 6 the total or is 5 after the -1?
Dexterity: 6 (Stout. -1) - lowenlyon1mthComentado por
Mondongo
Muntungus - lowenlyon2mthComentado por
4y and no news i have to say gg
I did not forget about this story nor I dropped it. Currently, I'm writing my other story. Once, I'm done there, I will restart my work here. - lowenlyon2mthPublicado por
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there is a word that bug me off, every time you use he, his is a female when should be a male one, and you use her, she when is a male one when should be used in females
Tl: I actually wrote this novel in Indonesian language, but some of my readers wanted me to translate it into English,So I used Google Translate to translate this novel into English, so there may be some words that are not clear, but thank you all for your all input, bro. [My English needs a lot of improvement, I typed this alsousing Google Translate]. And please continue to comment on chapters that seem to have wrong words so I can improve them a little, Thanks bro😁 - lowenlyon3mthComentado por
maybe it will be better to say " give me your life" or something like that
"Hey, kid, under Hidden Mist Jutsu, even if your strength is good, it is impossible to avoid my attack. Give me death!" He shouted out the last sentence, exhausting all his strength. A sword slashed out towards Hiro's side, and the violent wind hunted and snapped. - lowenlyon5mthComentado por
lol
"Daddy… Let's not compare with this pervert! The immortal bird Marco couldn't help but say, "This guy is not right, really, such a powerful strength, absolutely wrong!" " - lowenlyon5mthComentado por
sauron is a nakama
Luffy and Sanji, Sauron, Usopp and the others set sail again, leaving the town of Rogue and heading directly towards the Upside Down Mountain, where they also officially stepped into the great route.