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For the new magic powers I hope that his magic follows his characteristics of a “survivor”. I would recommend stealth or something like flash (like in LoL) for mobility. The second would be like a phantom scout (bird). Not something over powered and slows him to develop skills with his gun and possibly other hextech.

Did tinkatink skip an evolution? If I remember correctly tinkaton is the final evolution. Tinkatuff the the middle evolution.

You know what would be funny? The black book of grudges becomes a Noble Phantasm. Each grudge and punishment is enforced on the opponent in a separate space, where they experience what the people in the Black Book of Grudges went through. It won't be lethal, but it will hurt (since no one dies in the Black Book of Grudges; it's mostly pranks).

It's a great story with compelling storytelling, but some parts just seem random. Especially the alien recruitment scene. Ed literally should not have had enough time to do intergalactic politics or relief aid while building his organization. The time frame is too short and Ed’s life is on a timer. Other than that the story flows well,

Steve doesn’t have a tyranitar. He has a metagross

Thx for the chapter

This is a little sus

No harem please

I personally wouldn't like it. But if written logically it would be acceptable. I think that the dragon doesn't need to breathe because they live off mana.

1, but later Hades learned enough alchemy to betray his partner right after creating the philosopher's stone. Hades has no starting point and would have ignorantly damaged his body if he learned about it himself like how Edward and his brother. If you decide to leave it as it is I would recommend that Hades has some kind of lasting injury during his study of Ren's alchemy notes like a mechanical arm/leg that is not affected by Hades' own philosopher stone. It would give Hades motivation to seek Ren to reverse his ailment.