Strider79

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The story does have world building capability but it seems the author possibly is saving that for another story in his “connected universe” of novels. The author does a fairly decent job of providing comic relief and writing characters with a modicum amount of depth and background. The ending seemed rushed with a lot of plot elements just washed over or not resolved. Overall a 3.5-4/5. Not as expansive/great as the Soul Land novels by the same author.

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Thanks for the chapter