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Good first chapter but I really don't like the MC's looks, I hope it won't be mentioned to much so I can have an anothe mental image for the MC.
He is low on both. Yeah no, it's not like he's low on both but lack them entirely
It's far beyond even that
This author has no idea how 1st POV works
If the MC don't see the glances then don't state it since it's a 1st POV story...
I would, He is aware of animagus and literally said the dog seemed "human". In fact not using it just shows how utterly stupid he is...
She just became 16
She's barely 16
How dumb you have to be to be completely broke with near reality warping powers...
It's Saitama moment you uncultured mongrel