He needs to ask Stan something. For real, he has the chance to ask God a question and he hasn’t?

I want to phrase this by saying I have no problem with harems. I like them and I also like single pairings. The problem with this is that you’re not taking the time to develop the individual relationships.

Another female to the Harem grindstone. we just finished securing another female and before you can even progress with her you decide to throw another one. It was first Padme, then Natasha, now Carol. You have a problem with trying to focus on one female at a time and grow that relationship and instead just slam women at him, one after another. Hell he’s not even dating anyone but you’re just throwing women at him.

I don’t think you understand how economics works. The fantastic four and Tony Stark are the ones who are going to be making and producing the materials and then selling it. They should be taking a larger chunk of the profits because they are putting more into the product itself

The author will totally ignore this oversight because then he would have to actually go back and change things.

This isn’t even a cliffhanger since we know exactly what he’s about to say

“Where have you been all these years?” “I got abducted by a blue alien”

This is so unnecessary because he knows force healing. I’m pretty sure.

Not once did Peter ever call his sixth sense, his spider sense. Why would he call it that then?

Miguel O’Hara: “Talons and Fangs: O'Hara possesses elongated canine teeth that secrete a paralyzing, though non-toxic, venom. He also possesses short, retractable talons at the tips of his fingers and toes that he uses to dig into surfaces, enabling him to crawl along them as a spider might. The talons are also razor sharp and, coupled with his great strength, are able to rend materials as durable as cinder block. Spider-Man 2099's original Suit is made of unstable molecules, the only clothing he owned that could resist tearing from his claws. The costume also includes a light air foil on its back. This foil emits a low concentration of anti-gravity particles that allow O'Hara to glide on currents of air. In addition, Miguel could use the arm blades on his suit as weapons. Concentration: Although Miguel's talons are retractable, he needs to maintain consistent mental and physical concentration to keep them retracted within his fingertips. This can cause problems should his focus be disrupted while holding onto objects or people.” He has talons, not cat claws like you’re trying to pull off to go with her “black cat” motif. He doesn’t have the ability to stick to anything, he instead uses his claws to climb walls so if you’re gonna give her claws, take away the ability to stick to anything and make them a problem since the claws can’t stay retracted

In what universe does a spider bite give someone feline-like powers?

Should’ve turned them into sludge. “Thick heavy metal doors” being propelled into someone across a room? Yeah they’re not “knocked aside”, they’re meat chunks and paste

For a widow in training, she sure does cry and beg a lot doesn’t she?

He got bitten right in front of everybody

Peter Parker in the ultimate universe died at the age of 16. I get that this is an AU version but still

What is up with all these authors who write Spider-Man fanfiction and giving away spider bites to all the girls? Why? Just pull in one of the female Spider-Man from another universe and follow a plot line along that. That would be way better than just handing out Spider-Man powers to the female(s) he’s with.

This has to be one of the worst power trips out there. It’s based off of the daily life of the immortal king, with the seal and all. The mc has the personality of an edgy cardboard box. I don’t know why the “genius” tag is on there. He’s not. He’s an idiot who is just strong enough to end everything. There’s no plot and I can’t see this going anywhere realistically. This feels like it was written by a 12 year old with the need for a power fantasy with zero fantasy cause nothing is going on. Granted it’s only 5 chapters in but I can’t see a plot being worth anything cause he’s the strongest. There’s no saitama-esque story line possible where it focuses on the side characters and their struggles or anything remotely close to a slice of life since his life is all about finding a stronger seal to prevent the end of the universe. The premise would’ve been better if you dropped the whole seal thing and just focused on a saitama type of story where he’s strong asf but just lives a normal life, trying to be a normal person but it’s DC, problems will find him. The daily life of the immortal king style just doesn’t work for DC.