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Ancient_Egyptian2mthrespondió a PeterPanIt's okay to write realistic or different circumstances and kinds from time to time. Sticking to one type of woman would make them look like reading the same dialogue over and over. You have already crossed the 500 milestone so you would know better than me about this anyway.
At present Das did not care about two lakhs… As she is constantly crying, Das directly sent two lakhs to her account and silenced her running mouth. She even gave him a kiss after seeing the long number on her mobile screen.- Ancient_Egyptian2mthComentado por
She has a B-rank gold-digger talent
But I will gift you a new iPhone if you use your mouth." Das said while staring at her big round eyes. Amy went into a deep silence after listening to his offer. She is definitely got tempted after listening to the new offer from Das and after minute she decided to follow his suggestion as she is already using her hands. - Ancient_Egyptian2mthComentado por
no, you wouldn't... he only goes on a suicide trip to the brothel because his heart was broken.
Amy, who was watching all this from a corner, felt vexed. She could have owned that iPhone if her sister had continued her relationship with Das for a few more days. Amy really liked that iPhone in the hands of Das. She decided to ask Das for that iPhone. But she can't do that now... because her sister will scold her. - Ancient_Egyptian2mthComentado porCh 17 Chapter 17 : Hidden families
- Ancient_Egyptian11mthrespondió a TwistedLove
That seems worse than saying that...
"Of course, I will be my big brother's bride!" Haruna said cheerfully. Since childhood, Haruna was very attached to Tenku and said she would be his wife someday. - Ancient_Egyptian11mthComentado por
Yes!!!
"Reward 3: A hamster." - Ancient_Egyptian11mthrespondió a Ancient_Egyptian
I am not disappointed.
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It was mentioned several times that he died, and also mentioned as a disappearance... Are you hesitating about whether to add him or not?
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Maybe he is not good, (usually, Chinese MCs are awful human beings)... But anyone would be furious if he discover treachery from his subordinates... Especially if it leads to one death.
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Interesting introduction.
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I shall trust you, and give it a go.[img=Feeling it]
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I am just purely disappointed in the characters in general, from the main characters to the mobs. They are just too fake, the MC is full of himself and antagonizes every rock he sees, and the side characters are too trashy to be real in such an extreme situation. They lack depth and were just hollow bodies that exist to ridicule the MC and be face slapped. And the mobs are worse, they are just generic background cheerleaders.
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Okay, we get it can you move on already.[img=Shocked]
As the other students continued to glare at him, Xylon remained steadfast. He wouldn't let their fear and hatred get in the way of his dreams, and he was determined to show them that he was more than capable of holding his own. - Ancient_Egyptian11mthrespondió a Kw0z
So, you don't know?[img=sad]
"My name is Allen Grayblight. I'm a Hell's Gate player, and Kafra asked me to come here," he said, flashing a grin. - Ancient_Egyptian11mthComentado por
Bro, you are no longer the mighty Zephyer and you were never an almighty.
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Mr. Author, you are been too contradictory.[img=Speechless]
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I still can't comprehend how.....
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Oh I see, someone did his homework.[img=proud]
As the years went by, Xylon began to realize that his family had a severe lack of magical energy, which made them the target of constant bullying and ridicule. Their affinity for magic was also the lowest of all families, further cementing their place at the bottom of the social hierarchy. - Ancient_Egyptian11mthComentado por
For a demon general... He seems weak. Even a few children can bully him with all of his experiences. Why?
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