PhAntom25

the mc is running before he could evenre walk. you keep introducing new characters within the storys first week time frame you introduced 30 new character and forgot about 20 by next week. only to add another 30 character

I was being sarcastic with my comment and everything you said is true but the end result is who cares. Yes alot of this stuff is predatory and can disgust people but it's not like it doesn't meet the historical time period so it gets a general pass not every story can be a child friendly story.

shame on you the mc is not a rapist he even hates them

I dont think if he was that drunk he would even have the balls to kiss her

also neither did the females

would you have asked if you were in their position, asking your younger brother that always one ups you?

arnold mom was never disrespected and this all happened because arnold was being selfish in the first place and all things said and done this a family dispute between an adopted kid and biological kid with the same father. arnold belongs to the family as an outsider he not in the core sibling rivalry to even get mad at the situation

the story is good it moves a bit fast but it overall makes sense. if anything is bad it would be the mc. the mc at the beginning seems loveable and you want to root for him but as the chapter goes on this guys cockiness is off the chart. it makes you start to not like the mc because of how hypocritical he becomes and his one dimensional idea of justice. that justice only exist for him and his selfish needs

guy tells you his being forced to do this. and your response was fk you I'm gona kill you anyway even when I can save you...

Jake ain't wrong about arnold