Saiv

I'm speechless as to how bad this is, it's an info dump rather than a story and just straight up tells summary of movies with 2-3 repeating lines with context being I have worked hard and I'm reborn

Interesting take on canon by exploring gwen's spiderverse the mc needs to be humbled a bit but otherwise looks good, hopefully the author will continue updating

The writing is too robotic feels like ai generated contains too much extra information the story seems good with different povs but is a bit headache inducing for me at least, I hope the author works on this otherwise seems like a good story

Yes

Kindly do a timeskip so much filler is getting boring

The grammar and syntax is so wrong that I can't even understand what is happening kindly try to proofread you own work and check if someone else can understand it