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alfr01183hComentado porIt is lake that got bird fruit Kaya got the medicine one
Kaya, determined to grow stronger, clenched her fists with resolve. "Facing two Four Emperors means I need to master the Suzaku form of my Bird Fruit—Phantom Beast Species."- alfr01181dComentado por
It whould be better to make some more speace cuas like this it is hard to read it[img=recommend]
Konoha Village March 13, forty-seven years; - alfr01185dComentado por
If there was it whould be danzo
Nagasawa's expression became serious. No one would dare to use Genjutsu on him at such a big meeting, so it was most likely true. - alfr01186drespondió a Mystr
Seems Like there was some critical hit when he did it
Once he broke through the Black Iron Realm and advanced to the Bronze Realm, the number of days he could infuse into the Imperial Beast would increase.detailGlobal Beast Taming: Awakening Top 10 SSS Talents at the BeginningOriental · The golden robe is like a dragon - alfr01188drespondió a Leo_DiAngelo
Thats allright mistakes Can happen I just Wanted to let you know about it Keep up the Nice work i love this fanfic [img=strong][img=strong][img=strong]
The closest one was about three dats away from where we currently were. We immediately turned towards that direction and sailed. The entire crew were already celebrating and placing bets on who would win. As I saw some betting against me for the duel, I couldn't help but remember the fact that nobody really saw the both of us fight for the first time. This would probably be the first time that they would see us fight each other properly. - alfr01188dComentado por
Three days not dats
The closest one was about three dats away from where we currently were. We immediately turned towards that direction and sailed. The entire crew were already celebrating and placing bets on who would win. As I saw some betting against me for the duel, I couldn't help but remember the fact that nobody really saw the both of us fight for the first time. This would probably be the first time that they would see us fight each other properly. - alfr01189drespondió a david_dinh
Just it have been like that for a lot of chapters so just want to know if there was a higher level and what it was called like they chould be called Master->grandmaster->holy master -> celestial master or something like that
The martial artist's might that Lu Chen was now releasing was clearly not that of an Extreme Realm Master. In other words, Lu Chen was no longer an Extreme Realm Master; he had likely broken through the Grandmaster rank to become a Grandmaster.detailHaving children earns benefit, start competing for dominance in the world by marrying a wifeOriental · Summer fades into autumn. - alfr011810dComentado por
Not Blake but black
A big-nosed principal pointed at Phineas, saying, "Blake, you have a day like this. You were scolded by a student!" - alfr011810dComentado por
It should be he and not I
"Harry clearly violated the school rules. Although it was a blessing in disguise, I was selected for the Quidditch team. I also received a broom from Professor McGonagall today." - alfr011811dComentado por
I sleep well then 😂
"After the Chūnin exam is over, I'll train Sasuke well." - alfr011811dComentado por
Should it not be main house instead off branch house
Hiashi addressed Neji, emphasizing the significance of the impending battle with Sasuke. This clash had garnered immense attention from all corners of Konoha, and the weight of their family's glory rested on Neji's shoulders. Should he emerge victorious, Hiashi promised to share with him a secret technique exclusive to the branch house. - alfr011813dComentado por
Broken though grandmaster to become a grandmaster?
The martial artist's might that Lu Chen was now releasing was clearly not that of an Extreme Realm Master. In other words, Lu Chen was no longer an Extreme Realm Master; he had likely broken through the Grandmaster rank to become a Grandmaster.detailHaving children earns benefit, start competing for dominance in the world by marrying a wifeOriental · Summer fades into autumn. - alfr011819dComentado por
Should say lakeman and not Hancock
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Not Conrad but lakeman
Este párrafo ha sido eliminado. - alfr011822dComentado por
Should say kakasihi
"Sasuke, is it convenient to talk now? I knocked several times, but you didn't seem to hear me," Sasuke asked, his expression calm as if he were unaware of anything. - alfr011825dComentado porKimimaro won't arrive as consumable reinforcement to take Sasuke's barrel, and at the same time, Lee hasn't undergone his last "youth" operation and must still be facing the shock of his life. I can almost imagine him muttering that the sand is evil...
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Should say beast and not east
The key is that Kaishu, the east, still enters Mary Geoise alone. - alfr01181mthComentado por
Also it said in last chapter that minato was from a clan….
Looking at the class, Naruto started, "Yondaime Hokage, whose real name is Namikaze Minato, started off like all of us here. Like some of us, he had no in-born skills or bloodline limit that we know of. After becoming a Genin, he became a student to Jiraiya the legendary Toad Sannin along with two other Genins. Under Jiraiya's tutelage, he gradually started making new advancements…" - alfr01181mthrespondió a Drojam
Well just to have a bit off fun but she is oden after all so she is a he 😂
"I want more!" Yamato exclaimed from his beach chair eating his takoyaki. - alfr01181mthComentado por
At this time jimbi is a whitebeard member first after Edward dies jimbi will join big moms crew
everyone's eyes landed on the people falling from the sky, along with a marine ship. they were lucky as they just so happened to land where Joze had picked out the huge piece of ice, so they landed in the water, which knocked out a few, while the devil fruit users started to sink... luckily for them, there was a fish man amongst them. a former world lord of the sea, Jinbe who was also part of the Big Mom pirate crew.