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Nathankogrady2yrrespondió a LeWilThat's a good point
Este párrafo ha sido eliminado.- Nathankogrady2yrrespondió a The_End_of_Days12Ch 19 Chapter 19: Test 1 Rewards (2)
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The author really liked to read "I can see hints: digging to survive" So similar it's gross.
A second tail grew out from behind the little Spirit Fox, and the entire tail appeared emerald green. - Nathankogrady2yrrespondió a DeathLingers
Pretty sure he's just got his experience from hell tho, yanoe 400 years of it
He was still studying about the surrounding, he didn't want to be stupid and run towards the enemy while thinking he could take anything. He was very careful when it came to this kind of situations. That was one of the main reasons why he could survive in the HELL. There were many enemies who could kill him with flick of their finger, so he had to make sure he had a good exit plan if he went to kill a very powerful enemy. - Nathankogrady2yrComentado por
So throat liquid + air = dead people Nice
The byproduct of the rapid oxidization of the reactive chemicals ejected from the Collector's pyrocatalytic glands hitting its biotrigger was toxic to humans in sufficient quantities. - Nathankogrady2yrComentado por
Thought he was gonna say the spiders were fishing
Yet that did not necessitate a complete lack of silk production. The Collector was quick to sense a thread of thick, rope-like silk dangling down from above, drooping down like a lure to the forest floor. - Nathankogrady3yrrespondió a Tomoyuki
Na don't downplay yourself, it's an amazing book, I haven't managed to put it down and am on around 300 chapters now.
"Richard!" she called out, waving at me. Looking up, I crossed over to meet up with her in the middle. If you were expecting jealous male students to glare murderously at me, then be disappointed. Such stupid clichés didn't happen in reality. Normal people knew they had no right to decide who Alicia gets to socialize with. - Nathankogrady3yrrespondió a Tomoyuki
It's not about how repetive other stories are in that aspect, people get annoyed at that too. It's just u seem to be making this one of the main focuses of your story. Your story is amazing and I can't seem to put it down, yet I do find myself skipping these parts more often then not. If you don't want this critic that's okay and I'll delete my comment :)
"Richard!" she called out, waving at me. Looking up, I crossed over to meet up with her in the middle. If you were expecting jealous male students to glare murderously at me, then be disappointed. Such stupid clichés didn't happen in reality. Normal people knew they had no right to decide who Alicia gets to socialize with.