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I kind of like these early chapters, the author is building his world with his respective changes, a small problem in my view is the repetition of people's reaction to how talented the MC is, and how he always perfectly performs everything he does, which is not so wrong, because if I saw a 4-year-old "baby" doing what the MC does I would literally: 🤯🤯🤯🤯 for anything he does, it's just a bit simplistic but very understandable
I'd like to see Kaizen forming some real bonds, Kakashi is material for a solid friendship, in the future see him just chilling with the bros, or going out for the night in a bar or something, maybe some girlfriends. All in all I'd like to see him more chill, thanks for the hard work author-san!
I don't disagree with your point, but he was so perfect that it's strange, reaching the age of 50 in a profession where it's common to die early leaves its mark on people, even more so on someone as perceptive as a good Nara, not to mention that orphan origin is very open, who were his parents, his ancestors? What was the MC like before he became aware of his old life? Even a genius needs a base, if while growing up he only played with the other kids it's not a very solid background, for an analytical mind it passes, but his fighting prowess against the older boys is way off the mark, how did an orphaned civilian have so much proficiency in completely dominating 3 almost-graduates without receiving any significant injuries? Very suspicious
This chapter was good, but I was expecting something more serious, since as a kunoichi this principal's duty was to extract as much information as possible from this first contact, something like a dance to find out who our Kaizen really is, having all the micro-expressions being analyzed, all these millimetrically perfect answers from the MC, in my opinion, are very suspicious, I don't think even Tobirama would be so genius when compared to the MC, not to mention that there should have been a background check, what the MC was like when he was in the orphanage, who his parents are and so on. All in all, I liked, the fact that they didn't suspect him so much because of his age and the fact that he doesn't have a bizarre background, so I think it's valid that he passed the principal' check without too many problems.