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Thanks. Was a bit tired when I wrote this one.
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Velkor.[I'm just replying to all comments so I can see them.]
bro your comments don't show up on the chapters so I don't know where to make the corrections. :(
Yo, what exactly is this correction? :)
I should probably mention the pretending in that part. Thanks
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I think close works just as well.:)
The adaptation fragment worked with what it had.
Were would the his go?
This is action. Not just the typical action of Xianxia fights with flowery words and big attacks.No this is grimy, brutal and curt shootouts.In a site that focuses more on fantastical abilities this novel is a breath of fresh air that brings one into the badass world of guns.Grammar wise there isn't anything I saw that .I do feel as if the story could use a bit of fine tuning but honestly this is miles ahead of most things posted on here.Good job Easy_Tiger. :)