Daoist_sword_edge
Thinking is a crutch for the unable minded
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Daoist_sword_edgea month agoComentado porJust in case you forgot this was translated.
- Daoist_sword_edgea month agoComentado por
No wild animal fearing for it's life is going to react like this.
- Daoist_sword_edgea month agoComentado por
Huh?
- Daoist_sword_edge6 months agoComentado por
What a ridiculous statement. Your mc has so many advantages and has so much more skill and experience, yet you measure him against a 6(?) year old child.
- Daoist_sword_edge6 months agoPublicado por
In this story the charming and charismatic protagonist charms everyone with his charisma. The charisma he gives off is obvious to everyone from a young age due to his charming personality.
- Daoist_sword_edge7 months agorespondió a Emmanuel_Capricorn
A person has triumphed over something. A person is triumphant after success.
- Daoist_sword_edge7 months agoComentado por
He has magic, how is he dehydrated. The trope is so strong it overwhelmed his ability to summon/create water inside his body.
- Daoist_sword_edge7 months agoComentado por
English rhyme after translation? Very cool.
- Daoist_sword_edge7 months agoPublicado por
Love how this looks, hoping for many chapters and regular updates. .
- Daoist_sword_edge7 months agoPublicado por
There are literal love heart emoticons in the story. I cannot explain how much of a turn-off that is. My recommendation is not to do that. I gave it 3 stars because I couldn't get past the love hearts, and if the story gets better from there, I haven't read it.