It's was already meh with that hero complex, but now it went completely downhill...

From first few chapters it looks like a well writing story, however it's not for my taste. I find "puppet" (controlled by some being or system in the dark) MC quite dislikeable.

What's the point of having reincarnator background if he's acting like little kid anyway

Agreed

He's to kind to do that...

Why would anyone complain about that... Mc is not even that dark, more like neutral good, so there is no reason to cry over it. Would prefer him to be more dark and cruel, but it's not going to happen..

Was is not needed, qudian doesn't allow editing posts...

Is it dropped? Liked the setting of Lord of the mysteries, but I couldn't handle the original MC, he was just stupidly kind and caring. So it would be nice to see this fanfiction continuation

City Lord versus Mc would be interesting, also mc taking control of dark guild also would be fascinating. About the romance, not really important, he can be alone for what I care, or fuxk and forget would also do the trick

Nice chapter, finally saiyan behaving like a real one, not like peace loving idiot

Too evil? Lol, don't make us laugh, he's acting like a real saiyan, not like kind and peace loving idiot. Finally I must say, cuz other stories always turn saiyan into some kind peace and kindness retar.d

Why does every DBZ story has an idiot mc who let's some radom green wrinkle bag to mess with his head...

Yeah, big BS letting his secrets out immediately for some weaklings..

So it's happening, reincarnator begins to warm up to total strangers just because he possess body...

I agree wit you, he's acting like trained dog for that family. There is no revenge at all, basically this entire story is bs.

Meanwhile author: Awaken, cliff hanger sword! Always cut at the most interesting part

Spacing between paragraphs is quite weird, makes it alot more difficult to read. Also, I would suggest author using grammary app or browser extension, it would be a great help for better grammar which in return would improve reading experience by quite alot.

Haven't expected that coming

What's the point of material wealth and useless emotional attachments, if you can get killed by fart of stronger magus or whatever? As long as Mc is strong enough ,he can have whatever he wants.

Nice surprise with all these chapters , thanks