SabakuMoon
Lv15
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2017-05-10 Se unióUnited States
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SabakuMoon14 days agoComentado porwell, that just pushed him down on my list of likeable characters.
- SabakuMoon15 days agoComentado por
Author~😂
- SabakuMoon16 days agoComentado por
oh dear. girl, you went too hard on your bro. you need to boil him slowly.
- SabakuMoon16 days agoComentado por
Sigh he will never understand, but I hope his sister tries her best to convert him into one of us.
- SabakuMoon16 days agoComentado por
not sure if this is just a conflict. personally I would categorize it as lifetime grudge since it involves a family death. But I'll see how the author spins it. there's already a bit of foreshadowing that the ML is not the originator or entirely at fault.
- SabakuMoon19 days agoComentado por
*waking up?
- SabakuMoon20 days agoComentado por
Is this said out loud? if not, then it should stay in 3rd person and the previous tense.
Este párrafo ha sido eliminado. - SabakuMoona month agoComentado por
probably meant "only know how to eat"
- SabakuMoona month agoComentado por
maybe "only know how to eat"?